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With ease I fall into the world we never should’ve created
A world where comfort finds me and my words flow freely

My laughter travels the miles for you to hear
How I long for my lips to follow and land within your heart
A world void of reality, no reminder of how far apart we really are
The reality that tells me we aren’t together

Your words erased my pain with a single verse
You made me cry with a smile on my face

The words hit my heart before it knew they were yours

Without reality does it really matter if you don’t care?

I pour out my heart; you use words I don’t want to understand
Slowly I pull away from the charades; reality smacks me across my heart
All I feel is pain through the falling tears

You walk away as I gather the shards of my shattered heart
No glance at the past, regret will never find you

I put my heart together with the words you chose just for me
An apology is sweet, but bitterness finds the girl who believed love conquers all
©2005-2009 ~xpunkxatxheartx
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we tried to love each other but in the end he said it wouldn't work...he wrote me a poem, he sent me a compiled apology through music and yet it was never enough

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:iconzeeltje:
amazing!

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mens sana in corpore sano

a sound mind in a sound body
:iconxpunkxatxheartx:
never thought anyone would use that word to describe something i wrote...thank you so much!

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"Don't I make you laugh?
Should I try it harder?
Why do you see right through me?"
~Kasey Chambers
:iconzeeltje:
well i just say it if i really like it! so that means something :)

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mens sana in corpore sano

a sound mind in a sound body
:iconluxlelak:
That's heartachingly good...that last line made me tear up *hugs*

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:iconeastbaytj:
i have some one like that in my life . we still talk just because i want her mor ethan none. you know what that means i am sure. i write about her alot and well i have derived so much from that exsperiance that i am better for not worse. you probly say that to your self too. it is the only thing that keeps me going. i enjoyed reading this peice you should keep it up cause you are good.

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guity
:iconxpunkxatxheartx:
thank you so much. yeah i still talk to him all the time because i could never see my life without him even if we aren't together! thank you again for the kind words and the fav!

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"Don't I make you laugh?
Should I try it harder?
Why do you see right through me?"
~Kasey Chambers
:iconeastbaytj:
your welcome , thankyou for alowing me to read your work

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guity

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